Tuesday, June 20, 2006

With out u I feel like

With out u I feel like

a sail without wind
sun behind the clouds
water beneath the ice
flower without fragrance
bird without wings
child lost in forest
food without salt
dumb without words
deaf without your voice
numb without your touch
dead without your life

yes dad I feel so dead without you around

I am working in office suddenly remembered my dad and felt the above, so thought of penning them down

5 Comments:

At 7:19 PM, June 20, 2006 , Blogger Priyamvada_K said...

Dear Enigma,
Its tough...and I know the feeling. Take time to reflect - maybe do something you two liked to do. Or take up something he wanted you to do that you hadn't been able to in his lifetime....That might make him happy (wherever he is), and will put some wind in your sail.

Priya.

 
At 1:39 AM, June 21, 2006 , Blogger Archer said...

Hey Enigma,
No, i havent stopped posting, just there was a short forced break 'cos of hectic work.

Wanted to comment on ur prev post, but went out of words when work again started honking.

Last post was real good to prove the identity. Sounded like u r more of an American (with more points to tell) with a flavor of Indian heart. But again those few points as an Indian are strong enough to override an American's mind.

And this current post definitly proves that there is an American garb put on an Indian's heart out of circumstances, if am not wrong ;) Never allow those feelings for him to fade away, the love, care, affection, and all those many other cultured feelings can be kept alive within us only by those feelings for our parents.

 
At 11:43 PM, June 22, 2006 , Blogger Divster said...

It touched my heart...

Love u too, Dad! Happy Father's Day...

 
At 9:51 AM, July 13, 2006 , Blogger Apoorv Gawde said...

Thanks for stopping by enigma...glad u liked the pics. and this is a very touching post.

 
At 6:38 PM, July 19, 2006 , Blogger Sindhu said...

Very touching...

 

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